This answer is
not too bad but there is a better answer. You want to maximize the number of sp2
carbon-sp3 carbon bonds which are stronger than sp3
carbon-sp3 carbon bonds. The alkene will also be stabilized by
hyperconjugation resonance and you should also try to maximize this interaction.
You were also incorrect in that, if the double bond formed in this direction,
the trans isomer would be formed not the cis.